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Thinking -
She had not moved from her
meditative state for hours, her legs crossed and her hands rested on her knees. The sun beat through the unobstructed
windows, but she could not see for the dark blindfold over her eyes. Lost in her thoughts, the katana sat just in
front of her free of its sheath waiting.
The scent of fresh roses from the garden outside filled the room as she
took another deep breath, listening to the shadows. Miranda had lost much in her life, having
never known her father but still his enemies were coming for her.
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(99 words)
You've set this up nicely for a follow up . . . .preparing for her enemies arrival . . .liked it. . . a lot. xx
ReplyDeleteA powerful piece of writing. You managed to convey a lot in your 99 words.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to more.
Wow, that's all I can say. Waiting for the exciting follow up.
ReplyDeleteLisa
Gorgeous imagery...loved this piece so much!
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