Visual Dare: Gutted
“Patrick!”
A hood covered his head; cuffs bound his wrists and panic
set in. “Patrick!” Nathan yelled, trying
to sound more confident. He remembered the
truck, nothing else. The air smelled and it
clung to his lungs with each breath. Pushing
his back up the wall, a step forward and the floor beneath him creaked.
“Pat!”
Unable to hide
his fear, two quick steps forward and he tumbled to the floor shaking the hood
free. He saw his friend’s cold stare and
immediately realized why Patrick had never answered. An old woman’s cackle echoed throughout the decaying
home…
(97 Words)
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Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteOooh, creepy... Great tension!
ReplyDeleteNever trust the old woman...
ReplyDeleteHaunting. makes you wonder what the old woman was up to ...
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