Five Sentence Fiction – Scarlet
Her jeep sat in the same place it had when he left for work
that morning; he knew something was up
as normally her days off are spent on the beach, the local café absorbed in her
laptop writing, or at the bookstore seeking the latest mystery novel. He walked through the door and straight into
the kitchen where his eyes drifted to the stack of congratulatory cards; they
were still arriving though the wedding was four months past. When he made his way to the second floor he
immediately saw the paint cans cluttering the end of the hallway outside their
office; the room where they spent many hours, where one wall was covered in
book shelves, another with trinkets and mementos of their past and dual desks
centering the room. Entering he was
greeted by newly red walls, a woman with as much paint on her clothing as the
walls, and his favorite thing in the world, her smile, “You like?” He instantly noticed her eyes, the deepest of
blue as they drifted off from him telling him all he needed to know, she hated
it, he quickly replied the best way he knew how pulling her tightly into his
arms and a simple kiss on the forehead.
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Goodness this is so you :) Love it!!
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DeleteSo romantic!I love their togetherness and the way he deals with the situation of best say nothing at all. xxx
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