Flower Blossom
Ayiana had ten minutes if she was lucky, but so far she had
not been. She had two wounds as glaring proof. The shoulder was only a graze,
nothing she couldn’t stitch herself. The gushing wound on her side was another
worry all together; she held her hand tightly against it feeling blood seep
between her fingers.
Ayiana could hear the sound of the authorities as they
frantically pounded on the door to the roof. She pulled off the shoulder length
wig of auburn hair, exposing the dramatic pixie cut of multiple colors. She
dropped it, no longer any use having severed its purpose getting her into the ‘Hive’.
Easy to slip past when everyone is afraid to look you in the eyes, she was a
clone to the woman of a much higher stature. Brought into the world nothing
more than an assistant, slave to the woman of her image. Things did not go as
planned, when grown Ayiana was too independent…deemed…dysfunctional, and to be
corrected.
If not for the rebels, she would have been just another vase
of ash spread in the gardens. Fertilizer to help the flowers bloom. But fate
had other plans for her and she could still see Byrnes big grin with his
scruffy grey beard as he helped her from her bindings. ‘Great plans for you my
flower blossom,” he said in his graveled voice.
Ayiana heard the crash, the sound of rustling feet as they
charged toward her. She didn’t have to
look; everything was so loud there had to be at least ten of them. So loud and distracting she almost didn’t
hear the familiar graveled voice in her ear piece, “I’m here.”
Very intriguing, Stephen! Now I want to know more about the story. Is Ayiana a clone?
ReplyDeleteI really like your angle on the thriller/sci fi. Nice work!
Ah, thanks. And yes, Ayiana is a clone.
DeleteOh how I love this piece!! Please tell me there is more and that we can read it sooooooooooooooon!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!! :) Honestly when I started this it was all jut for the flash fiction challenge....but when I was done I found myself wanting to write more. We'll see.
DeleteOh Steven, you are all about the feelings, aren't you? Wonderful emotions and descriptions captured in this piece. Really liked it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jo-Anne. :)
DeleteFunny/interesting side note...
ReplyDeleteAyiana is a native american name meaning Eternal Bloom.