Saturday, May 5, 2012

Five Sentence Fiction - Candy

Five Sentence Fiction – Candy

The light escaped the flickering candles, shadows danced around the room enjoying the splendor of the moment.  He felt her fingernails dig into his wrist as he stared into her heavenly green eyes and watched as she bit her lower lip in anticipation.  He leaned in to inhale her intoxicating scent as he slowly kissed the scorpion tattoo just below her ear, slow and lingering kisses as she closed the already small distance between them.  He felt her exhale a sigh as he pulled away to get lost in her eyes where he wanted to remain the rest of his life.  In that moment nothing else mattered, their problems, their lives outside their room as he slowly leaned in with his own eager smile, and kissed her sweet lips.

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  1. Nicely steamy! The scorpion tattoo was a nice touch.

  2. What can I say....very steamy and yet sweet. Liked it!!