The sobs and moans of the seven echoed through his head like that of a cavalry charging off to war. Deafening, it drowned his thoughts with the exception of a solitary word: why? Heart broken and numb, still he could not cry.
Someone so perfect, lifeless in his arms. This could not be how it was meant to be. He heard the whisper, he brought his foggy gaze upward, but only a white beard stared back at him.
“Kiss her…love can overcome all obstacles.”
He glanced to the woman still cradled in his arms, limp and without life, so close yet so far away. He pushed strands of her raven hair away, clearing her porcelain face and lips as red as a summer strawberry. In his heart he knew she was the one he had waited for his entire life as he leaned in and softly kissed her lips. Nothing, he kissed her again, holding his lips to hers tasting for a single breath, but still nothing happened. He looked up as the sound of the forest joined in the mourning and he pulled her limp frame to his tightly as the tears began to fall. It was not to be, he would live his long life, knowing his one true love was lost to him…
...he could smell the aroma of the tea, his mouth watered with anticipation as he brought it to his lips. He opened his eyes, the warmth of the tea still in his throat, his concentration broken by a never forgotten laughter. He had lived many lifetimes but only once before did his heart beat full of life, a time long ago. He twisted in his chair and looked to each table in the small cafĂ© to find the source of the woman’s laughter.
She had taken her seat only a few tables away, with a book in hand, her long raven hair fallen down around her shoulders. Her blue eyes met his and her strawberry lips formed a smile…
“Kiss her…love can overcome all obstacles.”
He glanced to the woman still cradled in his arms, limp and without life, so close yet so far away. He pushed strands of her raven hair away, clearing her porcelain face and lips as red as a summer strawberry. In his heart he knew she was the one he had waited for his entire life as he leaned in and softly kissed her lips. Nothing, he kissed her again, holding his lips to hers tasting for a single breath, but still nothing happened. He looked up as the sound of the forest joined in the mourning and he pulled her limp frame to his tightly as the tears began to fall. It was not to be, he would live his long life, knowing his one true love was lost to him…
...he could smell the aroma of the tea, his mouth watered with anticipation as he brought it to his lips. He opened his eyes, the warmth of the tea still in his throat, his concentration broken by a never forgotten laughter. He had lived many lifetimes but only once before did his heart beat full of life, a time long ago. He twisted in his chair and looked to each table in the small cafĂ© to find the source of the woman’s laughter.
She had taken her seat only a few tables away, with a book in hand, her long raven hair fallen down around her shoulders. Her blue eyes met his and her strawberry lips formed a smile…
Steven, you include so much detailed emotion - it has a very strong impact.:)) And the raven hair is lovely, but oh, oh, those strawberry lips! :)) Really liked it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jo-Anne. :) And yup, those strawberry lips!! :D
DeleteI like this! The disappointment and then the twist:) Good job.
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DeleteSo poignant and full of wonderful description, lovely writing!
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DeleteGreat job; loved the fruity details :)
ReplyDeleteAww, this is lovely! I also love the strawberry lips! Thanks for entering :)
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DeleteI must say, I too loved the strawberry lips and raven black hair, and agree you added oh so much heart and soul into your story. Truly beautiful and an extremely enjoyable read.
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DeleteVery nice. Excellent description of despair and loss. I got a creepy vibe in there at the end, which finished it off nicely for me.
ReplyDeleteCreepy?? :) lol Thank you.
DeleteOooooh this was pretty. I really enjoyed the longing he felt, the sadness. Great details and a nice ending twist.
ReplyDeleteI'm amused at how many people like the 'strawberry lips' part :) Thank you all.
ReplyDeleteI like the mirror imagery of the kiss and bringing the teacup to his lips -great detail. Good on ya!
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