Five Sentence Fiction – Tears
Sean placed his hand on the pocket of his shirt and like each
time before it brought a smile to his face knowing it was still there waiting. His forehead was soaked from the rushed three
mile walk, his eyes swollen with unwanted tears as he reached his destination,
their spot where they had come so many times before. He took a seat on the large flat rock over
looking a thirty foot drop, the tears no longer waited as he pulled their
picture and a necklace from his pocket and whispered, “sorry.” The sun had crossed from sight as he struck
the match and watched as the picture burned between his fingers, a long sad
smile on his face. He looked over the
edge of the cliff one last time; he could no longer see the bottom for
conquering shadows as he dropped the necklace into the dark…
You dear romantic you. Steven, this is lovely. (if I might though, I think there is a typo - did you mean to say wanted or unwanted tears?)
ReplyDeleteVery evocative, full of emotion. I loved where you went with this story. So glad you participated this week!
you would be right, i meant unwanted.
DeleteThis is so you! Love it, especially the last sentence.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
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