Five Sentence Fiction -
Armor
Anthony sat on the bench, fighting his emotions, with his
own mind and heart everything seemed to be against him. Storm clouds rumbled over head as he tried to
steady his trembling hands, he could not remember the last time he slept or
even ate. The armor ripped from his
heart and poured out into a hand written note.
He stood and crossed the small distance to her door step pulling the
flower from its place inside his jacket.
He set the blue lily on her doorstep giving one last long look at the delicate
flower, the flower covered most of the envelop with everything he ever wanted
to say inside.
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Nice--I feel for your character!
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteThat moment when you have to bare your heart and let down your guard...so beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteYup. :) And thank you.
DeleteSteven, this is so very lovely. I'm sorry I didn't see you had posted one until now. You've captured the emotion, the tentativeness, the longing, all very well. I'm so glad you wrote this my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteThis is so beautiful. You are so talented :)
ReplyDeleteAh, shucks. Thank you.
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