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Dancing Flame
A mean ole bastard…
Gabriella stretched her arms out over her knees watching the
dancing flames. It had been years since
she had been home, twenty six, she never thought this day would come. She had left on bad terms with her father,
but then he was not a pleasant person for anyone to be around. She thought often about the day he caught her
with Jacob in the barn. He nearly beat
the boy to death, a local football hero who would never play the game again. He
got by with little more than a slap on the wrist after the local police, who he
attended church with, learned of his reasons.
It was several weeks later before Gabriella could come up with enough strength
of her own to leave her life in Kentucky behind. An attempt to run away from her nightmares,
at eighteen she did not realize they were always there looking back at her in
the mirror.
The beating she had gotten because of Jacob was more than
she could describe leaving a noticeable scar under her eye but they did not
compare to the ones on her back. It wasn’t
the first time he had laid his hands on her.
At fourteen she had come home with a book about Jack the Ripper. “Blasphemy” he yelled, “there was to be only
one book allowed under his roof.” It was
weeks before she returned to school.
She watched the flames dancing in the blackness. She could almost see the figure of a woman
one arm outstretched toward the heavens and the other wrapped around her body
with a circle of flames at her feet. She
could see her face looking back at her seductively, wanting Gabriella to join
her. She knew who it was calling out to
her. She would never forget those eyes.
Gabriella had just turned nine. Her mother had been gone almost two years for
reasons she still did not understand but had come to suspect her father had
murdered her. She woke to the sound of a
woman’s voice. She still thought to this
day it was her Momma trying to warn her, to help her to escape the terrifying life
to come. She thought she felt her warm
loving touch on her face but it was only the summer night’s air creeping in
through the window. She sneaked from her
bed, through the house but never saw her father. Outside the house she heard the sounds coming
from the garage where her father often repaired vehicles for extra cash. Slowly she stalked with her bare feet she was
only a few steps from the door when she heard his voice, “Cmon.” Up to the door for a peak, she saw the three
women immediately for the moonlight shinning in from the other door. “You will show me the way,” her father yelled
out. They were bound together, unable to
scream with her father circling them much the way she had seen her dog survey a
carcass. “You were delivered
to me to show me the way to god.”
Gabriella peered through, her eyes met one of the woman’s
and she began to scream even through her covered mouth. Her father circled back, harshly grabbing her
jaw before turning to see what caused a glimmer of hope in the woman’s
eyes. “Mah child,” he laughed. He would make her watch everything he did
that night, a young girl who loved and trusted her father not knowing the evil inside
him.
She watched the flames.
Gabriella could no longer fight the tears as they streamed down her
face. She glanced to the bloodied knife
in front of her. She had come home to
confront her father. To right more
wrongs than she could ever count. Most
of all she had come home to take revenge on what her father had turned her
into.
At twenty she found herself hitchhiking trying to escape
other hard times. A trucker had stopped
to pick her up and tried to take advantage.
She saw what he wanted the moment he opened those doors, stepping inside
she knew she was given a purpose in life.
(697 Words)
Steven, I am moved by the power of your story. Nice to see you take a darker, edgier tone - you wrote it well. :))
ReplyDeleteSweetheart, I think this is your niche...Just saying.
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