Thursday, August 23, 2012

Five Sentence Fiction - Blush


Five Sentence Fiction – Blush




He had spent more time looking at her photograph than he wanted to admit, with every thought another question found its way into his head and with each passing second there was a new answer in its place all about his future…their future.  He had told her exactly how he felt in more ways than he thought possible, a feeling he did not even know existed before he looked into her beautiful blue eyes and she said the same words he had on his lips.  How much he cared, all the things about her that drove him crazy in every way possible from the good to the bad, the way she smiled to the way she cursed even though she would claim she never did.  He knew they both had left a lot unsaid, text messages or even a phone calls were not as good as a face to face and there was no turning away from how they felt.  He craved, even hungered to run his hand down the side of her face again, to touch her lips, to feel her small hands intertwined in his own; too see her blush and smile again just before they kissed. 

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7 comments:

  1. so lovely, so romantic... I am indeed blushing now after reading this :)) well done you!

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  2. So much passion in such a short piece, just lovely :)

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  3. passion packed prose, right there. Love it :)

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  4. You are such a romantic. I love the passion and the romance in this piece. I really, really, really could read loads more. x

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  5. Tender and slightly melancholy. Beautifully done.

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  6. Beautiful words...every girl wants to looked at like that!

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  7. I like this! Found you via Donna McNicol's blog (and the FB NaNo group). New follower looking forward to your posts :)

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