Five Sentence Fiction – Blush
He had spent more time looking at her photograph than he
wanted to admit, with every thought another question found its way into his
head and with each passing second there was a new answer in its place all about
his future…their future. He had told her
exactly how he felt in more ways than he thought possible, a feeling he did not
even know existed before he looked into her beautiful blue eyes and she said
the same words he had on his lips. How
much he cared, all the things about her that drove him crazy in every way possible
from the good to the bad, the way she smiled to the way she cursed even though
she would claim she never did. He knew
they both had left a lot unsaid, text messages or even a phone calls were not
as good as a face to face and there was no turning away from how they
felt. He craved, even hungered to run
his hand down the side of her face again, to touch her lips, to feel her small
hands intertwined in his own; too see her blush and smile again just before they kissed.
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so lovely, so romantic... I am indeed blushing now after reading this :)) well done you!
ReplyDeleteSo much passion in such a short piece, just lovely :)
ReplyDeletepassion packed prose, right there. Love it :)
ReplyDeleteYou are such a romantic. I love the passion and the romance in this piece. I really, really, really could read loads more. x
ReplyDeleteTender and slightly melancholy. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words...every girl wants to looked at like that!
ReplyDeleteI like this! Found you via Donna McNicol's blog (and the FB NaNo group). New follower looking forward to your posts :)
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