Five Sentence Fiction - Orange
The whistle of the arrow caught Ackyer off guard, he had not
seen the goblin with his dark green skin but his daughter held no hesitation
with her shot. “We have lurkers in the
marsh,” Januala stated as she glanced back at her father with his proud grin
plastered across his face as he pushed the boat along at a slow pace, “there
will surely be more waiting for us in the forest around the dock.”
“Vorsita
will send them a scurry,” Ackyer quickly stated he could see the rotted dock,
the path leading up surrounded by vines and thin trees almost shaped a dome
over the well placed stone path, they were nearly there.
The bones
of past visitors littered the beach, the goblins had secured many meals at the
expense of unknowing travelers and even now he could hear them moving somewhere
just out of sight.
The boat
came to the dock and just as swiftly the splash could be heard; the two
thousand pound dragon landed with a roar as he shook the water from his orange scales,
the sounds of goblins padding away brought a smile to the father and daughters
faces.
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Thrilling, visual, visceral...well done!
ReplyDeleteWell done Steven! The fourth sentence is simply perfect!!!
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