tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post5191703319664751644..comments2023-06-15T06:07:34.301-04:00Comments on Stuck in my Own Mind...: Five Sentence Fiction - HungerSteven Paul Watsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16674315801239798086noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-79426331604939471072012-01-19T21:31:07.177-05:002012-01-19T21:31:07.177-05:00Thank you all!Thank you all!Steven Paul Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674315801239798086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-56907139310641893332012-01-17T17:56:33.307-05:002012-01-17T17:56:33.307-05:00Good stuff, compelling reading, well done :)Good stuff, compelling reading, well done :)Rod Tysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935200891369776432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-25194439625687695752012-01-13T02:13:29.581-05:002012-01-13T02:13:29.581-05:00Brilliant writing!Brilliant writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-61845484025068469512012-01-10T21:46:06.762-05:002012-01-10T21:46:06.762-05:00Egad...I was there!! Well done!Egad...I was there!! Well done!Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-35012332568534140352012-01-09T19:59:41.953-05:002012-01-09T19:59:41.953-05:00That was a very original take on the prompt, and I...That was a very original take on the prompt, and I loved every minute of it! Great descriptive writing!Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-14936220887289786062012-01-08T16:23:08.064-05:002012-01-08T16:23:08.064-05:00An intense scene that seems to be building up for ...An intense scene that seems to be building up for some more "hungry" events! I love it! Your descriptions flow very nicely and leaves me wanting more.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-27758191608597663792012-01-08T15:51:41.529-05:002012-01-08T15:51:41.529-05:00Thanks! And thanks for the comments! This one was...Thanks! And thanks for the comments! This one was tough as I went through several ideas before I came to this.Steven Paul Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674315801239798086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-57480038415448728262012-01-08T15:40:12.179-05:002012-01-08T15:40:12.179-05:00Awesome job with hunger! 'the beast had the sa...Awesome job with hunger! 'the beast had the same appetite' leaves me wanting to know what happens next. Nice :)Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-49308928300417765132012-01-08T15:39:45.943-05:002012-01-08T15:39:45.943-05:00Really enjoyed the atmosphere you built in this an...Really enjoyed the atmosphere you built in this and like the image: "his scarred frame of past events". That could apply to many of us in many contexts. <br /><br />One little thing, hope its okay to mention, you probably meant " This was his day..." as opposed to 'is'.<br /><br />Always like your entries because you bring in worlds that I don't know but that I enjoy visiting. Thanks Steven!Jo-Anne (jtvancouver)http://www.goingforcoffee.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-8889281462181518812012-01-08T14:54:10.423-05:002012-01-08T14:54:10.423-05:00Oh man that is so good! Gladiators rule :)Oh man that is so good! Gladiators rule :)Angie Richmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03427286424394081888noreply@blogger.com