tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post4674892118329178516..comments2023-06-15T06:07:34.301-04:00Comments on Stuck in my Own Mind...: Five Sentence Fiction – FaeriesSteven Paul Watsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16674315801239798086noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-12688632774307664552012-06-28T19:56:35.931-04:002012-06-28T19:56:35.931-04:00"He could see clearly the mark she left on hi..."He could see clearly the mark she left on his face and felt the one he could not see even more." And we guess what has happened. Running from heartbreak is when we are all most vulnerable. Wonderful characterization.<br /><br />My favorite line would have to be her description: "hair a violent red with matching eyes and a mischievous grin." So well done.Stacy Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725893049379422490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-7577442463195595702012-06-28T14:51:37.971-04:002012-06-28T14:51:37.971-04:00The sight of her would definitely have been mesmer...The sight of her would definitely have been mesmerising! Wonderful imagery, crystal clear water, the trail, the dancing fire...and then the clearly defined beauty of the faery!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-85951764230709281432012-06-28T02:50:42.615-04:002012-06-28T02:50:42.615-04:00Simon is English, isn't he? "even the bir...Simon is English, isn't he? "even the birds are having a laugh at me". Steven, this storyline is very good and I agree that the visuals are strong. It is a lovely story.;)))Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-27328430129912046172012-06-28T00:12:22.566-04:002012-06-28T00:12:22.566-04:00I love the strong visuals here. Nice work.I love the strong visuals here. Nice work.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6572785071892954248.post-26980466499741038122012-06-27T21:51:44.617-04:002012-06-27T21:51:44.617-04:00Really well done! Crisp and interesting. "The...Really well done! Crisp and interesting. "The heart scars so easily" is a lovely line. And so true!!Lillie McFerrinhttp://lilliemcferrin.comnoreply@blogger.com